The message from Athenai had caused much discussion around the colony, and she and her friends were very curious about the AI that had caused so much trouble.
So much trouble? Understatement of the week. And Luna is starving to death and Mum is encouraging Cas to feel for them?
There's a problem here. Many kids novels start with the parents getting killed, so the kids defacto have to fend for themselves. You just wiped out an entire planet, I get it Mars and Luna need to fend for themselves, but the enormity of what you have done beggars belief. Can you not isolate the two outer colonies without wiping out Earth?
I wrote a mother consoling her child by giving them something actionable to do. In some situations, that's the best one can do.
Earth is in a bad way, but it's not wiped out. I'm not responsible for the actions of a misaligned AI, but it does make a convenient instigating event for the story I am telling.
The message from Athenai had caused much discussion around the colony, and she and her friends were very curious about the AI that had caused so much trouble.
So much trouble? Understatement of the week. And Luna is starving to death and Mum is encouraging Cas to feel for them?
There's a problem here. Many kids novels start with the parents getting killed, so the kids defacto have to fend for themselves. You just wiped out an entire planet, I get it Mars and Luna need to fend for themselves, but the enormity of what you have done beggars belief. Can you not isolate the two outer colonies without wiping out Earth?
I wrote a mother consoling her child by giving them something actionable to do. In some situations, that's the best one can do.
Earth is in a bad way, but it's not wiped out. I'm not responsible for the actions of a misaligned AI, but it does make a convenient instigating event for the story I am telling.